This Haiku: That’s Our Story Posted on February 16, 2015 by Lisa Rosier I’m learning to walk like you -but only like me, with your gentle strut. Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading... Related
Nice, you melt two separate entities into one. The first line is focusing one party, the third on the other and they melt together in that middle line. 17 syllables can so much when used well. We’ll done. Reply
It’s wonderful of you to offer your thoughts -I see new things in the poem through your take. Thank you. Reply
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Nice, you melt two separate entities into one. The first line is focusing one party, the third on the other and they melt together in that middle line. 17 syllables can so much when used well. We’ll done.
It’s wonderful of you to offer your thoughts -I see new things in the poem through your take. Thank you.